標題:
Re-write this thanks
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Recently my teacher is going back to the US and she is a really good teacher. Can anyone re-write the piece of writing below? Make it more of a professional writing, and "emotional" like Chinese poems, but in English.- Life is like a bridge, the bridge that we'll undergo happiness, sadness,... 顯示更多 Recently my teacher is going back to the US and she is a really good teacher. Can anyone re-write the piece of writing below? Make it more of a professional writing, and "emotional" like Chinese poems, but in English. - Life is like a bridge, the bridge that we'll undergo happiness, sadness, bitterness and hardship. The first thing we have to learn is acceptance. No matter what, we learn to accept things we cannot change. It has been a wonderful time to be your student. I've learnt a lot. Time to say a farewell. I hope you'll have a good time there, and enjoy the rest of your life. It seems, you know a bit straight...
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Not sure if this meet your poetic standard but I'll give it a go: - Life is like a bridge - a bridge that we will go through happiness, sadness, bitterness and hardship. The first thing we have to learn is acceptance. No matter what, we learn to accept things we cannot change. It has been a wonderful time to be your student. I have learnt a lot. It is time to say goodbye. I wish you all the best when you return to US, and may every day of your life is filled with joy and laughter. I change the the short form to of " 'll" and " 've" because in formal writing, the long form is usually used.
其他解答:
The second person: wtf hard sell?!! If the site was good I don't reckon you would even need to come here and post such bloody piece of crap. Another words, you've left a bad impression. LOL
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